The Beginning of all things to Come Feedback

[adrianstriker]

Well, i've posted my debut rp. And I thought I did pretty damn good. But its not what I think its what you all think. So if you could, please rate my rp 1 - 10. Also tell me what you like best about it and what you dislike about it. Thank you all

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[Mr. Extreme]

Ten out of Ten! It's possibly the best roleplay that I've ever seen from you!